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Do You Like This Wording? HotMom21ERF Due December 17; 1 child; Kentucky 19578 posts
21st Jan '13

For mine and SO's wedding invitations:



" We wish for you, our family and friends,
to share with us the tender
moment of our marriage.
We look toward a future
that holds an ever growing love.
Please join
(My Full Name)
and
(His Full Name)
As we pledge our vows
on Saturday, the sixth of April,
Two thousand and thirteen
at three o'clock in the afternoon,
Our Church
Our Church's Address
Reception immediately following
Our Reception Hall
Reception Hall Address "

Booger & Bubba's Mommy 18 kids; Illinois 8136 posts
21st Jan '13

I don't like tender moment. It sounds like like you want them in the bedroom with you.



"To share with us in the joining of our families in marriage"



Sounds better to me. The rest of it I like.

HotMom21ERF Due December 17; 1 child; Kentucky 19578 posts
21st Jan '13
Quoting Booger & Bubba's Mommy:" I don't like tender moment. It sounds like like you want them in the bedroom with you. "To share with us in the joining of our families in marriage" Sounds better to me. The rest of it I like."

really? hmmmm. i think of tender as something sweet and memorable. thank you for your opinion!

user banned 1 child; Germany 12377 posts
21st Jan '13
Quoting Booger & Bubba's Mommy:" I don't like tender moment. It sounds like like you want them in the bedroom with you. "To share with us in the joining of our families in marriage" Sounds better to me. The rest of it I like."

Lmfao I was going to say something similar.



I really like it all OP, except the word tender lol

user banned California 8675 posts
21st Jan '13

Not really keep looking did you made that up? Congrats on your engagement and upcoming wedding!

HotMom21ERF Due December 17; 1 child; Kentucky 19578 posts
21st Jan '13
Quoting WhY bOtHeR:" Not really keep looking did you made that up? Congrats on your engagement and upcoming wedding!"

no, i got it from google. poo, i really liked it!

Buzz and Almond Joys momm 2 kids; Albuquerque, New Mexico 12593 posts
21st Jan '13

I really dislike the tender moment part. Other than that I like it

Not tellin 3 kids; Montana 55982 posts
21st Jan '13
Quoting HotMom21ERF:" For mine and SO's wedding invitations: " We wish for you, our family and friends, to share with ... [snip!] ... Our Church's Address Reception immediately following Our Reception Hall Reception Hall Address ""



I like it! If it works for you, go with it!

♥. 2 kids; making moves in, TX, United States 1114 posts
21st Jan '13

It's alright.. It could be better, I would keep looking OP! Congrats btw!

Dr. Unoriginal Originally Japan 28 posts
21st Jan '13

I like it!

Not tellin 3 kids; Montana 55982 posts
21st Jan '13
Quoting Booger & Bubba's Mommy:" I don't like tender moment. It sounds like like you want them in the bedroom with you. "To share with us in the joining of our families in marriage" Sounds better to me. The rest of it I like."


Why "families"?

HotMom21ERF Due December 17; 1 child; Kentucky 19578 posts
21st Jan '13
Quoting Buzz and Almond Joys momm:" I really dislike the tender moment part. Other than that I like it"


is there a different word besides tender that would make it sound better?

Not tellin 3 kids; Montana 55982 posts
21st Jan '13
Quoting HotMom21ERF:" is there a different word besides tender that would make it sound better?"



I found this and thought it was kind of cute. Although, I do like what you have origionally as well.



The harmony of love
meets with the melody of life
to create our beautiful
love song
Please join us to celebrate

HotMom21ERF Due December 17; 1 child; Kentucky 19578 posts
21st Jan '13
Quoting Not tellin:" I found this and thought it was kind of cute. Although, I do like what you have origionally as well. ... [snip!] ... as well. The harmony of love meets with the melody of life to create our beautiful love song Please join us to celebrate"

awwww cute!

user banned 1 child; Germany 12377 posts
21st Jan '13
Quoting Not tellin:" I found this and thought it was kind of cute. Although, I do like what you have origionally as well. ... [snip!] ... as well. The harmony of love meets with the melody of life to create our beautiful love song Please join us to celebrate"

I like how much more short this is.