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Can someone help revise my english paragraph PLEASE!!! Little Richard's mommie! Due July 12 (boy); 1 child; Seneca, South Carolina 4430 posts
28th Feb '13

I made some simple mistakes on my last paragraph assignment and somehow I came out with a f**king 72 because I didn't think I was capable of having someone revising my English paper; but my instructor informed me otherwise since then. Is there anyone who would be will to revise my paragraph for me? Please I just reallllyyyy want a MUCH better grade this time around!!!!!! Oh and the topic is about the day I found out I was pregnant.

*KatteyBug* Due November 18 (boy); 1 child; Madison, AL, United States 2166 posts
28th Feb '13

I'm no teacher but I can look at it! :)

Little Richard's mommie! Due July 12 (boy); 1 child; Seneca, South Carolina 4430 posts
28th Feb '13
Quoting *KatteyBug*:" I'm no teacher but I can look at it! :)"

I think it was mostly grammatical errors but thank you :D!!! I will pm you it! Thanks!!

Mama BooBoo(: 1 child; South Carolina 638 posts
28th Feb '13

if you need any help i can take a look at it!